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The Pixie Detective: Opener

The Pixie Detective opener

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               FADE IN:



               EXT. ABANDONED SHIPYARD - DAY

               Broken down boats of various size and makes sway up to the
               water's edge, rocking against the reeds at the edge of the
               bay's channel.

               Overgrown shrubs and reeds sprout up, dotting the football
               field size yard.

               Old dilapidated warehouses sit lopsided on a badly aging
               boardwalk type DOCK. 



               DOCK

               Small box like SHACK once used as an office, stands in front
               of the warehouses to the edge of the dock. Reeds shoot up
               tall enough to reach and partially hide the shack's front
               entrance.



               BARBED WIRE FENCE

               In the near distance, beyond the tall barbed wire chain link
               fence that surrounds the shipyard, a small RANCHER sits alone
               in the wide open meadowland.



               INT. SHACK - CONTINUOUS

               Two men sit talking at an uncovered dusty wood table. One of
               the men, the BOSS (40's) sloppy, heavy set, stubble faced, a
               man without the slightest notion of morality, chumps on a
               stubby cigar.

               The other man, TIGGY (30's) skinny, scrubby face, looks
               easily intimidated by men like the Boss, but a bully around
               the weak, wears unkept, filthy clothes.

               The two men play a game of cards and garble about something
               that can't quite be understood and filters down to,



               EXT. BENEATH DOCK, UNDER SHACK - CONTINUOUS

               A little pixie girl, CAITLYN (7) tomboy, wears shorts and
               summer shirt, listens to the men in the shack. Caitlyn
               clutches a Sherlock Holmes size detectives magnifying glass,
               and wears a Sherlock Holmes hat that nearly covers her head.

               A large sleek black cat, MISS BLACKY, sits along side
               Caitlyn. The cat watches Caitlyn with curious amusement.

               The male voices from above, now audible, filter down under
               the dock.

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         Hey Boss. When those Asian girls
                         gonna get here?

                                   BOSS (O.S.)
                         Soon Tiggy. Just hold your pants.
                         You get any skinnier, I'll have to
                         tie them up with a rope.

               Tiggy gives out a retarded laugh.

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         How much we gettin for them young
                         girls des time.

               Caitlyn looks through her magnifying glass up at the rafters
               of the dock. Miss Blacky meows.

                                   CAITLYN
                         Quiet Miss Blacky.

               The voices stop dead from above. 

               SUDDENLY

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         What was that Boss?

               Chair legs scrapping over wood, CREAKS down below.

               Caitlyn scurries to the opposite end of the dock. Miss Blacky
               trots right on her heels. 
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Sleigh Ride of the Red Missile: Opener

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               FADE IN:



               EXT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY

               The four lane main street runs through a bustling upper class
               commercial district. Bumper to bumper vehicles jam the
               street. Aggressive honking horns pierce the icy air.

               Streams of despondent faced pedestrians pack the
               intersections, impatiently waiting to cross the street.

               A slender Santa Claus stands in the midst of a sea of
               humanity, shaking a bell next to a red pot hanging from two
               upright poles. Occasional by-passers toss coins in the pot.
               Santa nods a thank you.



               EXT. NEW YORK SUBURB - DAY

               Clean paved street. Well manicured yards. Front shrubs
               decorated with colored light bulbs not lit. Doors covered
               with sheets of Christmas images.

               A two and a half story COLONIAL HOUSE sits 30 feet back from
               the street. Poster of Snoopy the cartoon character wearing a
               Christmas cap covers the front entrance door.



               INT. COLONIAL HOUSE/ MANORING HOME - CONTINUOUS

               Modern spacious sparkling kitchen well equipped with the
               latest household appliances.

               A large calender hangs from the wall near the refrigerator.
               It reads DECEMBER. All the numbered days are xed out up to
               but not the 23rd. That's today.

               CAROL MANORING (30's) slender, stylish, pleasant woman
               prepares breakfast over the stove.

               CINDY MANORING (15) vogue fashionable girl moseys in from
               another room. She rubs sleepiness out of her eyes. Cindy
               takes a seat at the table.

               KARL MANORING (30's) lanky clean cut man dressed in suit and
               tie lumbers in. Karl Kisses Carol on the neck. He takes a
               seat at the table.

               GRANDMA MANORING (70's) loving doting old fashioned gray hair
               grandmother, follows with walking cane ahead of, NATALIA (7)
               pixie Russian girl with large dark eyes. Grandma and Natalia
               take seats at the table.

               Cindy eyes Natalia discontent. 

               Karl stares at Cindy.

                                   KARL MANORING
                         Still not talking to us?

                                   CINDY MANORING
                         Your just so not understanding.

               Carol places a dish in front of Cindy.

                                   CAROL MANORING
                         Honey. We discussed the conditions.

                                   CINDY MANORING
                         It's not fair.

                                   KARL MANORING
                         We could understand your grades
                         dropping in spite of an effort.

                                   CINDY MANORING
                         So like, I'm not getting it.

                                   KARL MANORING
                         Maybe. Maybe not.

                                   CINDY MANORING
                         Oh great.

               Cindy stands up and strolls to the doorway.

               Carol places a dish in front of Karl. She stares at Cindy's
               plate, then at Cindy.

                                   CAROL MANORING
                         What about breakfast?

                                   CINDY MANORING (O.S.)
                         Not hungry.

               Grandma Manoring gazes at Cindy with a pleasing smile.

                                   GRANDMA MANORING
                         Remember Church tonight Cindy.

                                   CINDY MANORING
                         I don't have time Grandmom.

               Cindy points to Natalia sarcastic.

                                   CINDY MANORING (cont'd)
                         Why don't you take mom and dad's
                         new daughter?

               Karl shoots Cindy a disappointed stare.

                                   KARL MANORING
                         There's no need for that.

               Cindy tramps through the doorway and out of sight.



               EXT. REMOTE RUSSIAN SIBERIA - DAY

               The landscape buried under a solid layer of snow. Rail tracks
               stretch west to east for eternity in a desert of white. 

               A steaming locomotive charges by. Bold Cyrillic letters on
               one of the box cars reads, TRANS SIBERIAN

               The tricolored Russian flag flaps wildly from the side of the
               front engine. A faded emblem of the old Soviet Union painted
               on another box car.



               EXT. SIBERIA, FENCED COMPOUND GATES - CONTINUOUS

               Square brick dwelling sits adjacent to flying saucer sized
               CIRCULAR DISKS indented in the ground inside the compound.

               SUDDENLY

               One of the disk automatically slides open. A powerful stream
               of smoke and fire jetties out of the hole in the ground. A
               mammoth red tipped cone propels out of the hole, attached to
               a long circular ICBM (Intercontinental Ballistic Missile) 

               Cyrillic letters, CCCP emblazoned on the base of the ICBM. 
               The ICBM hurdles straight up clearing the compound and into
               the sky. It charges through cloud cover and out of sight.
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Lair of the Red Wolves: Opener

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              Lair of the Red Wolves

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               EXT. SIBERIAN MARSHLAND - LATE DAY

               Haunting overcast sky over a still eerie landscape. Dog's
               BARK breaks dead silence.

               A beaten man staggers into view. By the gruesome scars
               covering his face, an age can't be determined.

               Husky German Sheppard snips at the staggering man's heels,
               driving him forward. Three tall broad men trail behind.

               The trailing men are dressed in long grey coats draped to the
               ankles, exposing black jack boots. A fourth equally big man
               trails behind the three.

               They appear to be Russian officers, in fact they are Soviet.
               Their officer's cap reveal the insignia of the Hammer,
               Sickle, and red star.

               The officer's large emblazoned arm patches expose a big RED
               WOLF HEAD. Below that, the notorious symbol of the KGB.

               The staggering man falls to the icy ground exhausted. The
               Sheppard snaps his large canines at him.

               One of the officers, YURI CARGANOV (30's) tall broad
               shoulders, gently lifts the fallen man to his feet. The other
               officers shoot Yuri a cold unforgiving stare.

               A lumbering WOOD POLE juts 6 foot out of the marsh just
               ahead.

               The trailing fourth man, commanding Officer VICTOR SHEENIN
               (40's) a lumbering, hawking man, motions to the others.

                                   SHEENIN
                             (In Russian)
                         Tie him!

               Two of the officers hand their dog leaches to Yuri Carganov.

               The beaten man slumps to his knees. The two officers pull the
               man back up. One officer holds him to the pole, the other
               officer wraps a rope around the beaten man, securing him to
               the pole.

               Sheenin stares into the horizon with anticipation. He turns,
               grim faced, to the others.

                                   SHEENIN (CONT'D)
                             (In Russian)
                         Hurry! Lets go!

               The men tug on the dog's collars. For unknown reason, the
               dogs whimper, sensing great fear. The officers track back in
               the direction they came from.

               THE DISTANCE

               Dark swarm approaches. Large Siberian mosquitoes. The swarm
               heads to the man tied to the pole and engulfs him.

               The five officers track farther in the opposite direction.
               The horrified scream of the man tied to the pole echoes
               through the frosty air.

               Sheenin's eyes focus to the path ahead. He shows no mercy for
               the piercing cries. 

               Yuri glances uneasy over to his right side and stares at,

               CONCRETE MARKER

               Partly buried in the marsh. The concrete marker inscribed
               with large Cyrillic letters, C.C.C.P, a few unreadable
               Cyrillic words under it.

               EXT. RED WOLVES COMPOUND - LATER

               Darkness falls. The officers stand before giant iron gates of
               an enormous compound. On the gates, a rusting metal sign,
               reads in Cyrillic letters, THE RED WOLVES - SIBERIAN COLONY -
               CCCP 1955.



               EXT. SIBERIAN MARSHLAND - NEXT DAY

               Bright overcast sky. An eerie stillness.

               THE WOOD POLE

               An edgy pack of large gray wolves scatter in fear of
               something approaching.

               Two German Sheppards bark into view trailed by Sheenin and
               two other officers. Sheenin studies the pole. 

               A motionless bloody human carcass held loose by the rope tied
               to the pole. The flesh eaten away. Parts of the body gnawed,
               no doubt by the wolves.

               Sheenin with a stone cold stare, motions to the others.

                                   SHEENIN
                             (In Russian)
                         Untie him.

               The two officers approach the pole apprehensively. They
               release the rope's knot. The body slumps hard to the ground.

               One officer grabs the mutilated body by a strip of clothing
               still attached and drags the body off to the side. 

               Sheenin watches unflinching.

                                   SHEENIN (CONT'D)
                             (Russian/ subtitles)
                         He will be devoured by tomorrow.

               Sheenin turns about face and marches back. The other two
               officers trail behind. One of the officers pulls his gray
               coat collar tighter and peers into the sky.

               The sky grows hauntingly dark. 



               INT. COMPOUND, SHEENIN'S OFFICE - NIGHT

               A small room lined with bark walls. Two framed posters of
               LENIN and STALIN hang high on the wall.

               A potbelly stove sits in the corner.

               Yuri Carganov stands tall and straight facing,

               Victor Sheenin stares stone cold at Yuri. Sheenin is
               determined to break Yuri's resolve.

               Another officer stands adjacent. He's a huge towering statue
               of a man. He stares ahead unflinching, unemotional.

               Yuri Carganov and Sheenin speak Russian/subtitles.

                                   SHEENIN
                         Forget your humanity here comrade
                         Carganov. Goodness and mercy is a
                         matter of interpretation.

               Yuri eyes Sheenin's oak desk just behind the two men.

               An OLD BOOK lays in the open on the desk. A PENTACLE
               imprinted on the cover. A large DAGGER lays next to the book.
               Four stones attached to the dagger's handle. CRYPTIC letters
               engraved on the handle. 

               Yuri's glance returns to Sheenin.

                                   YURI CARGANOV
                         You don't believe in the Church.
                         But you do believe in something
                         other than our Soviet State.

                                   SHEENIN
                         The Church is dead. There are
                         greater powers among us.

               Yuri's eyes flick back to the objects on the desk than back
               to Sheenin.

                                   YURI CARGANOV
                         The future will have no need for
                         colonies such as this one. Our
                         society will progress to higher
                         standards.

                                   SHEENIN
                         How naive you are. There will
                         always be the need for THIS colony
                         as long as enemies threaten our
                         existence. 

               Yuri has heard enough. He clicks his heels, nods to Sheenin,
               turns and marches out of the room.

               Sheenin eyes Yuri with intense suspicion.

                                                               FADE TO:



               INT. MODERN AMERICAN CLASSROOM - PRESENT DAY

               A large flag of the USA boldly drapes the side wall.
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